Candorville by Darrin Bell for September 01, 2004
Lemont: In order to grow as a writer, I need to hear criticism, Susan, not just praise. I'd appreciate it more than anything if you could find some area where my writing can improve. Susan: Well, sometimes you prose is a little long-wined, Lemont. Lemont: Thanks, now that's valuable feedback. You moron. What do you know about writing?