the original edits are hard to read - to light, fads. Otherwise, looks like a keeper….but I thought that about “Green with Envy” too.
I agree with Pearl … hard to read the originals; even with the magnify feature.
Sorry about the image. It looks OK, not great, on my browser. We’ll work on that. Tomorrow, we’ll see the finished strip in all its technicolor glory.
Again, I think Nathan did a good job of giving some background and premise explanation very quickly in the first panel.
Del’s the new owner of the golf course, Cosmo (the Blue Jay) and Dewey (the bear) don’t want to be bothered and have lived there for their whole lives.
..sooo..the yellow thing’s a cat…
This is the first time I got to see how a comic strip is born. When you’re on board from the getgo it makes all the difference. FUUNNEEEYY!
Reminds me of the joke about the 3 drunks hiding from the police in sacks they find in an alley, as the cop nudges each sack, the first guy makes mewling noises, pretending to be a bag of kittens. the next makes puppy noises and the third guy shouts, potatoes, potatoes!!
lol. Peacock, peacock
Best of luck, Nathan, we always look forward to a new strip.